tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1641131935700377240.post7419985416416612065..comments2023-07-14T06:18:06.836-05:00Comments on Dancing on the Other Side of the Rainbow: Listen!The Quiet Riothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08728798238992058168noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1641131935700377240.post-89056115748296649592011-03-09T16:59:40.260-06:002011-03-09T16:59:40.260-06:00Dear 'Quiet Riot'
Congratulations on beco...Dear 'Quiet Riot'<br /><br />Congratulations on becoming a blog of note. I have very much enjoyed exploring your blog. I am new to the blogging world and, like you, am bravely foraging in the unknown, daring to share my creative writing with the world.<br /><br />I wanted to comment here because it is the piece of writing that I felt most drawn to. I love the personifcation of Autumn and the coat tails imagery that you use. It perhaps rang a chord as I have just written a piece that personifies 'Silence' as a coated being too. <br /><br />I feel that here your writing is most expressive and was instrested to see that you are far more descriptive in your prose (in my opinion - and this does not take away credit from your excellent poetry!), using your structures and punctuation to create a more powerful and engulfing image. This is something that I too aim to develop further, as well as exploring the purpose of punctuation in poetry. I believe that poetry should be read aloud and am, therefore, enjoying playing with the sounds that a poem can create.<br /><br />I would very much appreciate your thoughts if you ever wanted to venture to another poetry/writing site. I'm afraid I don't have your skill for creating such incredible visual art though!<br /><br />Thank you again for such a captivating read!<br /><br />glh<br /><br />http://andmilestogobeforeisleep-glh.blogspot.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com