Sunday, November 20, 2011

Temperment

Flashing eyes of fire-spark
lighting ways of mind and heart,
Dimming now as no one sees,
and dampening all desire.
Heart-sink, spell lost…slinking
away unknown and dejected.
Where among them is the one
who sees?
Who among them understands
the yearning need within, to hear
The words- to feel the joy
I seek to bring?
Pour it out as though my
soul were a cup
Spilling the mind-speak
upon the page……….
Yet no one goes there.

3 comments:

Ama B. said...

The initial rhyme in your poem hooked me so that I kept reading.

For some reason the context of your poem reminded me of LOTR, no idea why though...

This is a great blog you have going here! :)

Please check out my work, i'm a teen writer ^__^

http://the-writing-junkie.blogspot.com/

Girl on the Front Porch said...

excellent thoughtful blog!

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