And so goes the wheel that turns
The path that bumps and twists.
I am my Fathers child right now,
but something is amiss.
The strength I feel, the glimmers
The support he gives to me,
It’s really me that’s giving
within this family tree.
We join our hands, our spirits,
No one can really know
The child within gives back the strength,
That’s how the wheel should go.......
No guilt is felt, we understand
The nature of the way.
He gave to me when I was young
It’s my turn now to say
I AM HERE.
47 comments:
Hi there I am a new follower of your blog and I really love your poetry and artwork. I appreciate the blogs of note pages as there are so many wonderful blogs out there. Looking forward to the next post.
Olga from http://revedoa.blogspot.com
I love your art. I don't see your style very often at all and it's always nice to stumble upon such unique stuff.
Very Inspiring. :)
Kona
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Your poetry tells a story, and you hardly ever find anyone who writes this way any more.
seldom does a good find turn into a rare gift but this may ...
Cheers Mate.
i find immense talent in u.
A very famous poet once said' the child is the father of man'. How true it is, the wheel keeps on turning , we are young once and then become elders to the young! Well written poem!
I like the pictures you have and the poetry that goes with it. You are very talented!
this blog good and also quite good coupled with a good article too, it was perfect!
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a new follower here :)
just wanted to say that i was not disappointed! keep up the great work
Very nice!
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your poems are a delight.
Circles are wonders of nature, thanks for the great post.
so inspiring.
juxtaposing the natural and surreal, a moving combination
you blog is very much beautiful
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You are the best poet I have ever heard of. Your words are touching and inspiring. And oh so very true. You have an amazing gift. And your art is also very beautiful.
So glad that I found this blog. Your words and pictures really spoke to me. I'd be eager to hear about your inspirations...
Angie
Wow... Just wow. Amazing post
My comment is the same as OFCHokkaido's, above. WOW.
~Eve S. D'ropper, of http://wordsfromthehallway.blogspot.com
This is my first time blogging and when I came across you blog and read this I was amazed keep up the amazing writting.
This truely touched my heart. I was daddy's little girl my entire life and a spitting image of his personality now. He passed away 3 years ago. Thank you for this.
Very cool. :)
always a pleasure to have a read from you...
that was awesome. come check out my blog!
this is really wonderful just to stumble onto something like this what a great way to do a blog
oh that poem pulls at my heart strings.. very beautiful! thanks for sharing!
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Beautifully done. I'm new. This is inspiring. Thanks...
good
lovely post!
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This is a great post, but it might need some work....... I am not trying to be mean it is just like; this poem isn't that great after all,BUT THE STORY IS WONDERFUL!!!! <3
U have a great talent
Beautiful Post. This blog is good
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I Love your Post, right to the heart. keep writing.
Your artwork and writing is amazing!Thanks for sharing!
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wow your poems are pretty freaking amazing! my blog is ALSO about poems! i'd love if some people could write comments about them (:
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Beautiful images
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Suuuuuuper blog!!!! +Following
beautiful...i am my father's child
I am mesmerised.
Truth be told.. I don't like poetry. I am much, much better at writing free style. Like you find your solace in poetry.. I find my salvation in stories.
There's a story behind the making of every person. What's yours? What's the story which led to the creation of this amazing site and its wonderful content?
Yes. I am impressed. Probably because I like anyone who is better at me in poetry (almost everyone is =D ). But you touch a nerve with me always.
And your art.. C'est la chose loveliest jamais.
I am following you (obviously).
I know you don't have time and all.. but could you drop by my blog sometime? I love criticism. And I write about ANYTHING to EVERYTHING.
I'd love it if you share some of your ideas with me.
So long,
Neeati.
Site Owner- http://neeatinarayan.blogspot.com/
# This too, shall pass.
The poem is beautiful and it reminds me of that song: The Windmills Of My Mind" poems are based on personal thoughts and feelings and when read by other people it means different things to other people. Life is a circle like the seasons but every summer is different from the last summer.
Beatifully written. I also like the paintings as well. Thank you for your kind comment. I thought no one read my blog.
Your artwork, as well as your poems are a subject to be published ;) I love it
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